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<blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 94958" data-attributes="member: 312"><p>Amazing update! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/girls/m04127.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":spinning:" title="Spinning :spinning:" data-shortname=":spinning:" /> 10 out of 10 points! :fantastic: Especially loved that Ray and Donna “hooked up” and made the most of the day! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /> The time had DEFINITELY come!!! <img src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR8UlTaNDauA0XxeF5Ya2ZFlGqsSeZ7JPKH0IzDcXOym515uVp5&s" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":loveit:" title="Love it :loveit:" data-shortname=":loveit:" /></p><p></p><p>If I didn’t know any better, I would have thought that you were writing about a couple of teenagers here: <img src="https://smileyshack.files.wordpress.com/2010/12/smileyslaughing_lol_hehe_100-102.gif?w=145&h=150" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":giggle:" title="Giggle :giggle:" data-shortname=":giggle:" /></p><p>“<em>We can’t do this here,” she teased. She jumped out and ran around to the other side. He smiled at her as he hopped out and closed the door. They held hands all the way up the walk.</em>” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k0512.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":gotcha:" title="Gotcha :gotcha:" data-shortname=":gotcha:" /></p><p></p><p>I had to laugh when I read this: “<em>With all of the urgency, they didn’t wait long to get down to business.</em>” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ssmile/fun/s0208.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lol:" title="lol :lol:" data-shortname=":lol:" /> Not because it was funny, but just because it was easy for me to imagine how “desperate” they had to be feeling at that very moment! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ssmile/fun/s0228.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lmao:" title="LMAO :lmao:" data-shortname=":lmao:" /></p><p></p><p>Beautiful description of their lovemaking! <img src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR8UlTaNDauA0XxeF5Ya2ZFlGqsSeZ7JPKH0IzDcXOym515uVp5&s" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":loveit:" title="Love it :loveit:" data-shortname=":loveit:" /></p><p></p><p>Once again, you made me chuckle: “<em>After trying and failing several times to get redressed, Ray and Donna managed to get on their way to Southfork.</em>” <img src="http://smileys.smilchat.net/smiley/hello/happy/lol-2.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":lolo:" title="Lolo :lolo:" data-shortname=":lolo:" /> Very easy to imagine how their failed attempts went about ... ... <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/fun/m0167.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt="rotf" title="ROTF rotf" data-shortname="rotf" /></p><p></p><p>This sentence says so much more than the six words! : “<em>Ray smiled all the way home.</em>” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></p><p></p><p>Great love talk in Ray’s bedroom later on: :wink@</p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">“<em>Now this—this I planned”</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“And I planned this”</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“I could get used to this”</em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Me too”.</em></li> </ul><p></p><p>Amazing ending to this scene! <img src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR8UlTaNDauA0XxeF5Ya2ZFlGqsSeZ7JPKH0IzDcXOym515uVp5&s" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":loveit:" title="Love it :loveit:" data-shortname=":loveit:" /></p><p>“<em>They reawakened feelings and sensations that neither had felt since their separation. He felt her passion, and she felt his tenderness, emotions they had kept locked away for so long. ... ... ... They continued their reunion for the rest of the night, eventually falling asleep together, their bodies illuminated only by the Texas moonlight spilling into the room.” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05164.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":jolly:" title="Jolly :jolly:" data-shortname=":jolly:" /></em></p><p><em></em></p><p>Please update soon! <img src="http://www.allsmileys.com/files/sweetim-communicate/6278.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":best:" title="Best :best:" data-shortname=":best:" /> I can’t help but wonder if Margaret will wake up because of all the “noice” (or because she can’t find her mom)! :wink@</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ms Southworth, post: 94958, member: 312"] Amazing update! :spinning: 10 out of 10 points! :fantastic: Especially loved that Ray and Donna “hooked up” and made the most of the day! :kiss::kiss::kiss: The time had DEFINITELY come!!! :loveit: If I didn’t know any better, I would have thought that you were writing about a couple of teenagers here: :giggle: “[I]We can’t do this here,” she teased. She jumped out and ran around to the other side. He smiled at her as he hopped out and closed the door. They held hands all the way up the walk.[/I]” :gotcha: I had to laugh when I read this: “[I]With all of the urgency, they didn’t wait long to get down to business.[/I]” :lol: Not because it was funny, but just because it was easy for me to imagine how “desperate” they had to be feeling at that very moment! :lmao: Beautiful description of their lovemaking! :loveit: Once again, you made me chuckle: “[I]After trying and failing several times to get redressed, Ray and Donna managed to get on their way to Southfork.[/I]” :lolo: Very easy to imagine how their failed attempts went about ... ... rotf This sentence says so much more than the six words! : “[I]Ray smiled all the way home.[/I]” :kiss::kiss::kiss: Great love talk in Ray’s bedroom later on: :wink@ [LIST] [*]“[I]Now this—this I planned”[/I] [*][I]“And I planned this”[/I] [*][I]“I could get used to this”[/I] [*][I]“Me too”.[/I] [/LIST] Amazing ending to this scene! :loveit: “[I]They reawakened feelings and sensations that neither had felt since their separation. He felt her passion, and she felt his tenderness, emotions they had kept locked away for so long. ... ... ... They continued their reunion for the rest of the night, eventually falling asleep together, their bodies illuminated only by the Texas moonlight spilling into the room.” :jolly: [/I] Please update soon! :best: I can’t help but wonder if Margaret will wake up because of all the “noice” (or because she can’t find her mom)! :wink@ [/QUOTE]
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