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<blockquote data-quote="Ms Southworth" data-source="post: 98006" data-attributes="member: 312"><p>Amazing update! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05164.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":jolly:" title="Jolly :jolly:" data-shortname=":jolly:" /> Definitely 10 out of 10 points from me! <img src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR8UlTaNDauA0XxeF5Ya2ZFlGqsSeZ7JPKH0IzDcXOym515uVp5&s" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":loveit:" title="Love it :loveit:" data-shortname=":loveit:" /> Very hot, steamy, and erotic scene! Awesome writing skills on your part! <img src="https://i.pinimg.com/originals/3f/d1/cf/3fd1cf7a83ab196e88aebd2886914733.png" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":yep:" title="Yep :yep:" data-shortname=":yep:" /> I imagine that there’s a lot of you in the way that you write Ray, so any lady of yours is without a doubt a very lucky (and satisfied) woman! :wink@</p><p></p><p>I especially loved this part of their conversation: </p><ul> <li data-xf-list-type="ul">“<em>Where’s the kid?” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think :think:" data-shortname=":think:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Up at Southfork. She wanted to have dinner with Clayton and Miss Ellie.” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“So we’re alone?” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite10" alt=":oops:" title="Oops! :oops:" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":oops:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“That we are. So how’s your appetite?” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/black/t1607.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":cool1" title="Cool1 :cool1" data-shortname=":cool1" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“What do you mean?” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Well, I know what you’re asking about, but I was going to fix you something to eat.” <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite8" alt=":D" title="Big Grin :D" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":D" /></em></li> <li data-xf-list-type="ul"><em>“Come here, you.” <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></em></li> </ul><p></p><p>I loved everything about their lovemaking! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05164.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":jolly:" title="Jolly :jolly:" data-shortname=":jolly:" /> Truly beautiful just like it should be! <img src="https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR8UlTaNDauA0XxeF5Ya2ZFlGqsSeZ7JPKH0IzDcXOym515uVp5&s" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":loveit:" title="Love it :loveit:" data-shortname=":loveit:" /> It’s about making your better half feel like he/she is #1 and thus focus on <em>their</em> needs and desires instead of your own! :wink@ Great writing and imagination skills! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /><img src="http://yoursmiles.org/ksmile/babe/k05142.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":kiss:" title="Kiss :kiss:" data-shortname=":kiss:" /></p><p></p><p>I’ll be looking forward to many more updates! <img src="http://www.allsmileys.com/files/sweetim-communicate/6278.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":best:" title="Best :best:" data-shortname=":best:" /></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Ms Southworth, post: 98006, member: 312"] Amazing update! :jolly: Definitely 10 out of 10 points from me! :loveit: Very hot, steamy, and erotic scene! Awesome writing skills on your part! :yep: I imagine that there’s a lot of you in the way that you write Ray, so any lady of yours is without a doubt a very lucky (and satisfied) woman! :wink@ I especially loved this part of their conversation: [LIST] [*]“[I]Where’s the kid?” :think:[/I] [*][I]“Up at Southfork. She wanted to have dinner with Clayton and Miss Ellie.” :)[/I] [*][I]“So we’re alone?” :oops:[/I] [*][I]“That we are. So how’s your appetite?” :cool1:kiss::kiss:[/I] [*][I]“What do you mean?” ;)[/I] [*][I]“Well, I know what you’re asking about, but I was going to fix you something to eat.” :D[/I] [*][I]“Come here, you.” :kiss:[/I] [/LIST] I loved everything about their lovemaking! :jolly: Truly beautiful just like it should be! :loveit: It’s about making your better half feel like he/she is #1 and thus focus on [I]their[/I] needs and desires instead of your own! :wink@ Great writing and imagination skills! :kiss::kiss::kiss: I’ll be looking forward to many more updates! :best: [/QUOTE]
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