Reply to thread

Message

<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 212146">Thank you for the feedback. I enjoy reading your comments. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />[USER=130]@stevew[/USER] you are right, Cliff needed help not being sent to prison. Pam could definitely see that which is why she got him out of there. So he didn&#039;t die in that Mexican prison as Pamela Rebecca first thought. I agree that there are some similarities between JR/SE and John Ross &amp; Pamela Rebecca. I could definitely see some parallels when I wrote them. I guess Sue Ellen could see some similarities too, which is why she felt so bad when her son cheated on his wife like JR cheated on her. But yes both couples loved each other. I know you like the business stuff. I think you are better at writing those plots than I am and that&#039;s a compliment! <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/misc/m0719.gif"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":hat:" title="Hat&nbsp; &nbsp; :hat:" data-shortname=":hat:" />I like your idea about how Carlos could have loaned out JR&#039;s money and how it would affect the company. But this story is already finished so I can&#039;t make any changes to what I&#039;ve already written. I might be wrong about this, but it was my understanding that John Ross, Pamela and Chris losts their shares of Ewing Global in the end and that Bobby and Sue Ellen ended up with the whole company. So I have written it like they control 50/50 of the company with their kids not having any percentages at all at the moment. But of course John Ross is already scheming how to get it all back and get controling interest. You will see how that plot will play out and who will be on his side![USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] thank you. Yes Pam is back and you will learn soonish what really happened to her after she left Dallas. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1703.gif"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":think:" title="Think&nbsp; &nbsp; :think:" data-shortname=":think:" />*Elena was sitting down trying to read a book to distract herself when Christopher came back home that afternoon. Hearing the door to her cottage opening she looked up at him. But she didn’t say anything as she was clearly upset with him.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Hi Elena,” Christopher said as he walked up to her and gave her a kiss on the cheek. Elena then put down the book she was reading and gave him a look. But when she didn’t say anything Christopher went ahead and apologized, “Look I’m sorry about my reaction before,” Christopher said. “I shouldn’t have blown my top off at you. It’s just that I want this baby to be ours so badly,” Christopher said, placing his hand on Elena’s producing stomach so that he could feel the baby kick.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; His gesture made Elena soften. “I know,” Elena sighed. “I’m sorry too, I should have told you about John Ross and I from the start, it’s just that...” she looked down, as she put her hand next to his, “I guess I was afraid of losing you.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Never,” Christopher said, as he interlaced his fingers with hers. “Whoever’s the father of this baby I want you and I to raise him or her together.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Elena gave him a look, “You really mean that?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Yeah you know that I love kids,” Christopher said. “Heather already had a son when I met her and if she hadn’t gone back to her ex-husband I wouldn’t have minded becoming that little boy’s father.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Oh,” Elena made a face as she pulled her hand away.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Was it something I said?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No it’s just that I don’t like thinking about you and Heather,” Elena said, as the idea of the two of them together made her feel jealous.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Well I didn’t like you seeing Nicolas Trevino either,” Christopher retorted and Elena sighed before she stood up to face him.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Nicolas is dead.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “And Heather’s moved away,” Christopher told her. “Believe me she is not a threat to you.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Good,” Elena said before they both went silent for a moment. Then Elena changed the subject, “So how was the funeral?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; She had mostly asked to be polite and she definitely hadn’t expected the answer that she got, “My mom’s alive!”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “What?” Elena dropped her chin, as she wondered if she had heard him right.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “My mom is still alive,” Christopher repeated. “She came back for the funeral.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Elena frowned, “But what about Switzerland?” She asked him, looking confused. “I thought the couple in Zürich told you she was dead.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “They did,” Christopher acknowledged, as he pondered that for a moment before coming to a conclusion. “They must have lied to me. I guess they wrote the letter they gave me too.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I guess,” Elena shrugged her shoulders, “So what really happened?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I don’t know,” Christopher said.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; She gave him a concerned look, “You don’t know?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No,” Christopher shook his head. “My mother tried to tell me but I brushed her off. I guess it must have been the shock of seeing her and also everything that was going on with John Ross. I just wouldn’t hear her out.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “But Chris you must talk to her!” Elena insisted. “You need to get some answers.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I know,” Christopher sighed.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “So why don’t you call her and set something up for tomorrow?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I don’t know where to find her,” Christopher admitted.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Elena looked surprised, “She didn’t tell you?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No she left without telling me,” Christopher sighed.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Why?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Because I was fighting with John Ross!” Christopher said sheepishly and realizing that they must have fought about her baby Elena felt guilty.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Oh Christopher, I’m so sorry!”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No it’s okay, I bet John Ross knows where she is,” Christopher said.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “John Ross?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Yeah he knew she was alive but he kept it from me,” Christopher explained. “Turns out that my mom’s been raising his half-sister all this time!”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “What?” Elena dropped her chin, as it didn’t make any sense to her, “Why?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I don’t know,” Christopher said thoughtfully, “I guess I need to ask her that.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “You really do,” Elena said, before she pulled Christopher into a hug and he relaxed in her arms. It felt good that they had made up since he hated fighting with her. Yet he couldn’t help but feeling worried about their future since regardless of what he’d just told her he knew that if the baby she was carrying turned out to be John Ross’ or Nicolas he would be terribly disappointed. He was also apprehensive about seeing his mother again. But he knew that he had to see her now when she was back since he really needed to know why she had abandoned him when he was a little boy.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 212146"] Thank you for the feedback. I enjoy reading your comments. :) [USER=130]@stevew[/USER] you are right, Cliff needed help not being sent to prison. Pam could definitely see that which is why she got him out of there. So he didn't die in that Mexican prison as Pamela Rebecca first thought. I agree that there are some similarities between JR/SE and John Ross & Pamela Rebecca. I could definitely see some parallels when I wrote them. I guess Sue Ellen could see some similarities too, which is why she felt so bad when her son cheated on his wife like JR cheated on her. But yes both couples loved each other. I know you like the business stuff. I think you are better at writing those plots than I am and that's a compliment! :hat: I like your idea about how Carlos could have loaned out JR's money and how it would affect the company. But this story is already finished so I can't make any changes to what I've already written. I might be wrong about this, but it was my understanding that John Ross, Pamela and Chris losts their shares of Ewing Global in the end and that Bobby and Sue Ellen ended up with the whole company. So I have written it like they control 50/50 of the company with their kids not having any percentages at all at the moment. But of course John Ross is already scheming how to get it all back and get controling interest. You will see how that plot will play out and who will be on his side! [USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] thank you. Yes Pam is back and you will learn soonish what really happened to her after she left Dallas. :think: * Elena was sitting down trying to read a book to distract herself when Christopher came back home that afternoon. Hearing the door to her cottage opening she looked up at him. But she didn’t say anything as she was clearly upset with him. “Hi Elena,” Christopher said as he walked up to her and gave her a kiss on the cheek. Elena then put down the book she was reading and gave him a look. But when she didn’t say anything Christopher went ahead and apologized, “Look I’m sorry about my reaction before,” Christopher said. “I shouldn’t have blown my top off at you. It’s just that I want this baby to be ours so badly,” Christopher said, placing his hand on Elena’s producing stomach so that he could feel the baby kick. His gesture made Elena soften. “I know,” Elena sighed. “I’m sorry too, I should have told you about John Ross and I from the start, it’s just that...” she looked down, as she put her hand next to his, “I guess I was afraid of losing you.” “Never,” Christopher said, as he interlaced his fingers with hers. “Whoever’s the father of this baby I want you and I to raise him or her together.” Elena gave him a look, “You really mean that?” “Yeah you know that I love kids,” Christopher said. “Heather already had a son when I met her and if she hadn’t gone back to her ex-husband I wouldn’t have minded becoming that little boy’s father.” “Oh,” Elena made a face as she pulled her hand away. “Was it something I said?” “No it’s just that I don’t like thinking about you and Heather,” Elena said, as the idea of the two of them together made her feel jealous. “Well I didn’t like you seeing Nicolas Trevino either,” Christopher retorted and Elena sighed before she stood up to face him. “Nicolas is dead.” “And Heather’s moved away,” Christopher told her. “Believe me she is not a threat to you.” “Good,” Elena said before they both went silent for a moment. Then Elena changed the subject, “So how was the funeral?” She had mostly asked to be polite and she definitely hadn’t expected the answer that she got, “My mom’s alive!” “What?” Elena dropped her chin, as she wondered if she had heard him right. “My mom is still alive,” Christopher repeated. “She came back for the funeral.” Elena frowned, “But what about Switzerland?” She asked him, looking confused. “I thought the couple in Zürich told you she was dead.” “They did,” Christopher acknowledged, as he pondered that for a moment before coming to a conclusion. “They must have lied to me. I guess they wrote the letter they gave me too.” “I guess,” Elena shrugged her shoulders, “So what really happened?” “I don’t know,” Christopher said. She gave him a concerned look, “You don’t know?” “No,” Christopher shook his head. “My mother tried to tell me but I brushed her off. I guess it must have been the shock of seeing her and also everything that was going on with John Ross. I just wouldn’t hear her out.” “But Chris you must talk to her!” Elena insisted. “You need to get some answers.” “I know,” Christopher sighed. “So why don’t you call her and set something up for tomorrow?” “I don’t know where to find her,” Christopher admitted. Elena looked surprised, “She didn’t tell you?” “No she left without telling me,” Christopher sighed. “Why?” “Because I was fighting with John Ross!” Christopher said sheepishly and realizing that they must have fought about her baby Elena felt guilty. “Oh Christopher, I’m so sorry!” “No it’s okay, I bet John Ross knows where she is,” Christopher said. “John Ross?” “Yeah he knew she was alive but he kept it from me,” Christopher explained. “Turns out that my mom’s been raising his half-sister all this time!” “What?” Elena dropped her chin, as it didn’t make any sense to her, “Why?” “I don’t know,” Christopher said thoughtfully, “I guess I need to ask her that.” “You[I] really[/I] do,” Elena said, before she pulled Christopher into a hug and he relaxed in her arms. It felt good that they had made up since he hated fighting with her. Yet he couldn’t help but feeling worried about their future since regardless of what he’d just told her he knew that if the baby she was carrying turned out to be John Ross’ or Nicolas he would be terribly disappointed. He was also apprehensive about seeing his mother again. But he knew that he had to see her now when she was back since he really needed to know why she had abandoned him when he was a little boy. [/QUOTE]

Verification

6 + 4 =