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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 214556">Thank you for the feedback. It&#039;s always much appreciated. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />[USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] I am glad that you found the story gripping.<img src="http://www.sherv.net/cm/emoticons/thanks/animated-thank-you-smiley-emoticon.gif"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":ty:" title="TY&nbsp; &nbsp; :ty:" data-shortname=":ty:" />&nbsp;There&#039;s still a lot more to come of this story, as I just posted page 59 out of 200 pages! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />[USER=56]@Mrs Bobby James Ewing[/USER] I&#039;m glad that you love my new story. Wow! That&#039;s really a compliment saying that I should have been a writer on Dallas TNT. I&#039;m flattered. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/black/t1607.gif"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":cool1" title="Cool1&nbsp; &nbsp; :cool1" data-shortname=":cool1" />But yeah you are right about that I am a true Dallas fan who love the show and I do know these characters well after writing about them in fanfics for so many years. However in the last update I am sure you recoginzed that the flashback scene was not mine, but that I borrowed it from the original Dallas. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/misc/m0719.gif"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":hat:" title="Hat&nbsp; &nbsp; :hat:" data-shortname=":hat:" />Also since you were good with the feedback you&#039;re getting a double treat tonight! <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink&nbsp; &nbsp; ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" />*Elena woke up by the sound of a key in the door. Looking up she was surprised to see that it was her boyfriend, who was back already. For a moment she wondered how long she had overslept, but throwing one glance at the alarm clock she could see that it was not even nine in the morning. “Christopher? What are you doing back already?” Elena asked surprised. “I thought you were helping your dad on the ranch today.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “So did I,” Christopher sighed. “But he just took off.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Why? What happened?” Elena asked, as she got out of bed and walked up to him. “Did you two have a fight again?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No,” Christopher shook his head.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No?” Elena asked. “Then what?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I told him about my mom,” Christopher sighed heavily.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “And he didn’t like that you’ve gone to see her?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No that’s not it,” Christopher rubbed his forehead. “He was upset when I told him that Katherine had kidnapped mom. I’m not sure he even believed me when I told him that it was Katherine who had written the letter that he received from mom.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Well maybe that’s not so strange,” Elena said.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “It still upsets me though that my dad won’t take my word for it,” Christopher said. “I mean I believe mom so why can’t he?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Maybe that’s not it,” Elena said and seeing Christopher giving her a weird look she elaborated, “Remember how you felt when I told you about the e-mail?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; &quot;Yeah,&quot; Christopher frowned, as he was not following her,&nbsp; “ but what does that has to do with anything?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Maybe that’s how your dad is feeling right now?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No way,” Christopher shook his head. “I was upset because I still loved you but I was about to marry someone else...”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I know so we couldn’t be together then. Just like your dad can’t be with your mom now since he’s married to Ann.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Christopher dropped his chin when he realized what she was implying,&nbsp;&nbsp; “You really think my dad still loves my mom?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I don’t know,” Elena shrugged her shoulders. “But I always thought they seemed happy when they were together so I guess it’s possible.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Now when you mention it, their marriage was dissolved without them ever talking about it, so there is definitely something unfinished between them,” Christopher said.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Then they need to finish whatever’s lingering between them since if they don’t it’s just gonna tug at his heart until he explodes,” Elena said and Christopher nodded since what his girlfriend was telling him was making a lot of sense. So maybe that really was what was bothering his dad. That he’d never got a chance to say a proper goodbye to his wife.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 214556"] Thank you for the feedback. It's always much appreciated. :) [USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] I am glad that you found the story gripping.:ty: There's still a lot more to come of this story, as I just posted page 59 out of 200 pages! :) [USER=56]@Mrs Bobby James Ewing[/USER] I'm glad that you love my new story. Wow! That's really a compliment saying that I should have been a writer on Dallas TNT. I'm flattered. :cool1 But yeah you are right about that I am a true Dallas fan who love the show and I do know these characters well after writing about them in fanfics for so many years. However in the last update I am sure you recoginzed that the flashback scene was not mine, but that I borrowed it from the original Dallas. :hat: Also since you were good with the feedback you're getting a double treat tonight! ;) * Elena woke up by the sound of a key in the door. Looking up she was surprised to see that it was her boyfriend, who was back already. For a moment she wondered how long she had overslept, but throwing one glance at the alarm clock she could see that it was not even nine in the morning. “Christopher? What are you doing back already?” Elena asked surprised. “I thought you were helping your dad on the ranch today.” “So did I,” Christopher sighed. “But he just took off.” “Why? What happened?” Elena asked, as she got out of bed and walked up to him. “Did you two have a fight again?” “No,” Christopher shook his head. “No?” Elena asked. “Then what?” “I told him about my mom,” Christopher sighed heavily. “And he didn’t like that you’ve gone to see her?” “No that’s not it,” Christopher rubbed his forehead. “He was upset when I told him that Katherine had kidnapped mom. I’m not sure he even believed me when I told him that it was Katherine who had written the letter that he received from mom.” “Well maybe that’s not so strange,” Elena said. “It still upsets me though that my dad won’t take my word for it,” Christopher said. “I mean I believe mom so why can’t he?” “Maybe that’s not it,” Elena said and seeing Christopher giving her a weird look she elaborated, “Remember how you felt when I told you about the e-mail?” "Yeah," Christopher frowned, as he was not following her, “ but what does that has to do with anything?” “Maybe that’s how your dad is feeling right now?” “No way,” Christopher shook his head. “I was upset because I still loved you but I was about to marry someone else...” “I know so we couldn’t be together then. Just like your dad can’t be with your mom now since he’s married to Ann.” Christopher dropped his chin when he realized what she was implying, “You [I]really[/I] think my dad still loves my mom?” “I don’t know,” Elena shrugged her shoulders. “But I always thought they seemed happy when they were together so I guess it’s possible.” “Now when you mention it, their marriage was dissolved without them ever talking about it, so there is definitely something unfinished between them,” Christopher said. “Then they need to finish whatever’s lingering between them since if they don’t it’s just gonna tug at his heart until he explodes,” Elena said and Christopher nodded since what his girlfriend was telling him was making a lot of sense. So maybe that really was what was bothering his dad. That he’d never got a chance to say a proper goodbye to his wife. [/QUOTE]

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