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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 218743"><p>Thank you for the feedback [USER=130]@stevew[/USER] <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>I am glad that you liked the actor I picked for Lucas. Don't worry I don't take your feedback as criticism. It's good with constructive feedback. </p><p>Maybe the reason I have forgotten about the IPO was because the storyline wasn't very well explored on Dallas TNT like you pointed out. </p><p>I'm glad to hear that you think Pam and Josephine are entitled to go after what is theirs. </p><p></p><p>Okay so let's move on to tonight's update. </p><p></p><p>*</p><p></p><p>Sue Ellen had been dreaming about JR more than usual lately. It was almost like if the old bastard was trying to convey a message to her in her sleep. So by now Sue Ellen had a feeling that there was something she had overlooked. But for the life of her she couldn’t remember what it was that JR was trying to tell her. That was until this morning when the shrill sound of a telephone woke her up from another dream about JR. She looked disoriented for a moment before it suddenly dawned on her. The conversation she’d had with JR when he’d left wasn’t the last time she’d spoke to him, as he had called her on the night before he left for Mexico from Abu Dhabi. But for some reason that final conversation had been blocked out of her mind until now.</p><p></p><p> <em>Sue Ellen had been sitting by her desk at Ewing Global, catching up on some paper work when her cell phone rang. She looked at the display and when she saw the name JR written in large letters she felt excited. She hadn’t talked to him since he’d sent her their old love letters and she was eager to find out where he had kept them all these years.</em></p><p></p><p><em> So she picked up her mobile phone saying, “Hi JR!” </em></p><p></p><p><em> “Hello darling,” JR greeted her from the other end of the line.</em></p><p></p><p><em> “So I got the letters,” Sue Ellen smiled. “I’m surprised you’ve kept them all these years.”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Well of course I’ve kept them,” JR smiled. “You know me, I always keep things that are really important to me.”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Yeah I guess you do,” Sue Ellen said. “But I still was surprised when the letters arrived.”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Happily surprised I hope?”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Of course and you even wrote me a new letter too...”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Yeah about that, I was actually calling to see what your answer is to my question,” JR said coyly.</em></p><p></p><p><em> “What question?” Sue Ellen asked, as she for a moment wondered if he was going to propose to her again. But he didn’t. Instead he just clarified. </em></p><p></p><p><em> “The one that I asked you in the letter.”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Oh the letter,” Sue Ellen said, as she pulled out a drawer and looked at the new unopened letter. She was really curious to find out what was in there. But she tried to play it cool. “I haven’t opened it yet.”</em></p><p></p><p><em> JR sighed before he said impatiently, “Then why don’t you so I can have an answer to my question?”</em></p><p></p><p><em> Sue Ellen picked up the letter, now she was even more curious to find out what was in it. But before she got a chance to open it Gary popped into the room saying, “So are you ready to go to the car race?”</em></p><p></p><p><em> Sue Ellen sighed before she put the letter in her purse and smiled at Gary, “Of course just give me a minute. I’ve got your brother on the phone.”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Bobby’s there?”JR asked.</em></p><p><em></em></p><p><em> “No Gary,” Sue Ellen said.</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Gary!” JR spat out. “You know I don’t like...”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Don’t get jealous JR,” Sue Ellen said. “We are not married anymore.”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “I know,” JR sighed. “So about the letter...”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Oh for God’s sake I’ll read it later and get back to you okay?” Sue Ellen said in an annoyed tone of voice.</em></p><p></p><p><em> “So I guess the answer is no then?” JR said in a tired tone of voice.</em></p><p></p><p><em> “I’m sorry JR but I really must go now,” Sue Ellen said. “We’ll talk more later, okay?”</em></p><p></p><p><em> “Okay you take care now, you hear?”JR said. </em></p><p></p><p><em> “You too, bye JR!” </em></p><p></p><p><em> “Goodbye my darling,” JR said in a voice that sounded unusually sentimental. If she didn’t know better she’d almost think he was crying. But that was so unlike JR that it wasn’t even a possibility. Sue Ellen then hung up the phone, not knowing that she’d just blown her last chance with JR. She would never see or hear from him again and the grief she’d soon be facing would be so intense and filled with so many regrets for what could have been that it would push her off the wagon after 26 years of sobriety. </em></p><p></p><p><em> </em>The tears rolled down Sue Ellen’s cheeks once more, as she finally realized that JR’s letter hadn’t been all lies. JR had wanted another chance with her so if only she had read his letter when he had called she could have told him that yes she wanted to have dinner with him. She now found herself wondering if JR still would have killed himself if she had given him another chance or if he’d hanged on and let her nurse him until the end. If his conversation was anything to go on he would have stopped by Dallas before leaving for Mexico if only she had asked him to. They would have had their dinner and started all over again. But since she hadn’t read the letter until after his death she had been robbed out of that chance. So as she was thinking it over she suddenly had an epiphany. JR hadn’t lied to her this time. His letter had been sincere and he had really wanted them to start over and they would have if only she had said yes. It still hurt that JR had chosen to end his life alone rather than letting her be there for him. But at least now she knew that he had been sincere in his letter and that meant the world to her.</p><p></p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 218743"] Thank you for the feedback [USER=130]@stevew[/USER] :) I am glad that you liked the actor I picked for Lucas. Don't worry I don't take your feedback as criticism. It's good with constructive feedback. Maybe the reason I have forgotten about the IPO was because the storyline wasn't very well explored on Dallas TNT like you pointed out. I'm glad to hear that you think Pam and Josephine are entitled to go after what is theirs. Okay so let's move on to tonight's update. * Sue Ellen had been dreaming about JR more than usual lately. It was almost like if the old bastard was trying to convey a message to her in her sleep. So by now Sue Ellen had a feeling that there was something she had overlooked. But for the life of her she couldn’t remember what it was that JR was trying to tell her. That was until this morning when the shrill sound of a telephone woke her up from another dream about JR. She looked disoriented for a moment before it suddenly dawned on her. The conversation she’d had with JR when he’d left wasn’t the last time she’d spoke to him, as he had called her on the night before he left for Mexico from Abu Dhabi. But for some reason that final conversation had been blocked out of her mind until now. [I]Sue Ellen had been sitting by her desk at Ewing Global, catching up on some paper work when her cell phone rang. She looked at the display and when she saw the name JR written in large letters she felt excited. She hadn’t talked to him since he’d sent her their old love letters and she was eager to find out where he had kept them all these years.[/I] [I] So she picked up her mobile phone saying, “Hi JR!” [/I] [I] “Hello darling,” JR greeted her from the other end of the line.[/I] [I] “So I got the letters,” Sue Ellen smiled. “I’m surprised you’ve kept them all these years.”[/I] [I] “Well of course I’ve kept them,” JR smiled. “You know me, I always keep things that are really important to me.”[/I] [I] “Yeah I guess you do,” Sue Ellen said. “But I still was surprised when the letters arrived.”[/I] [I] “Happily surprised I hope?”[/I] [I] “Of course and you even wrote me a new letter too...”[/I] [I] “Yeah about that, I was actually calling to see what your answer is to my question,” JR said coyly.[/I] [I] “What question?” Sue Ellen asked, as she for a moment wondered if he was going to propose to her again. But he didn’t. Instead he just clarified. [/I] [I] “The one that I asked you in the letter.”[/I] [I] “Oh the letter,” Sue Ellen said, as she pulled out a drawer and looked at the new unopened letter. She was really curious to find out what was in there. But she tried to play it cool. “I haven’t opened it yet.”[/I] [I] JR sighed before he said impatiently, “Then why don’t you so I can have an answer to my question?”[/I] [I] Sue Ellen picked up the letter, now she was even more curious to find out what was in it. But before she got a chance to open it Gary popped into the room saying, “So are you ready to go to the car race?”[/I] [I] Sue Ellen sighed before she put the letter in her purse and smiled at Gary, “Of course just give me a minute. I’ve got your brother on the phone.”[/I] [I] “Bobby’s there?”JR asked. “No Gary,” Sue Ellen said.[/I] [I] “Gary!” JR spat out. “You know I don’t like...”[/I] [I] “Don’t get jealous JR,” Sue Ellen said. “We are not married anymore.”[/I] [I] “I know,” JR sighed. “So about the letter...”[/I] [I] “Oh for God’s sake I’ll read it later and get back to you okay?” Sue Ellen said in an annoyed tone of voice.[/I] [I] “So I guess the answer is no then?” JR said in a tired tone of voice.[/I] [I] “I’m sorry JR but I really must go now,” Sue Ellen said. “We’ll talk more later, okay?”[/I] [I] “Okay you take care now, you hear?”JR said. [/I] [I] “You too, bye JR!” [/I] [I] “Goodbye my darling,” JR said in a voice that sounded unusually sentimental. If she didn’t know better she’d almost think he was crying. But that was so unlike JR that it wasn’t even a possibility. Sue Ellen then hung up the phone, not knowing that she’d just blown her last chance with JR. She would never see or hear from him again and the grief she’d soon be facing would be so intense and filled with so many regrets for what could have been that it would push her off the wagon after 26 years of sobriety. [/I] [I] [/I]The tears rolled down Sue Ellen’s cheeks once more, as she finally realized that JR’s letter hadn’t been all lies. JR had wanted another chance with her so if only she had read his letter when he had called she could have told him that yes she wanted to have dinner with him. She now found herself wondering if JR still would have killed himself if she had given him another chance or if he’d hanged on and let her nurse him until the end. If his conversation was anything to go on he would have stopped by Dallas before leaving for Mexico if only she had asked him to. They would have had their dinner and started all over again. But since she hadn’t read the letter until after his death she had been robbed out of that chance. So as she was thinking it over she suddenly had an epiphany. JR hadn’t lied to her this time. His letter had been sincere and he had really wanted them to start over and they would have if only she had said yes. It still hurt that JR had chosen to end his life alone rather than letting her be there for him. But at least now she knew that he had been sincere in his letter and that meant the world to her. [I] [/I] [/QUOTE]
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