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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 218854">Thank you everyone for the feedback. I appreciate that you took the time to tell me what you think of my story. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />I&#039;m sorry the last update made you cry. But I think it says more about how invested we are in JR/SE&#039;s story than about my writing skills. I remember the first time I saw the episode when Sue Ellen was about to find out JR was cheating on her again with Holly Harwood. I didn&#039;t want her to find out since I didn&#039;t want JR/SE&#039;s marriage to be ruined. So I was literally screaming at the TV and jumping up and down, since I found that so suspenseful! I saw it in reruns so I was 14 at the time...[USER=130]@stevew[/USER] I&#039;m glad that the IPO didn&#039;t make it that clear who owned the company since then my idea of that Bobby and Sue Ellen owns 50/50 still works. But I agree with you that they should have compensated John Ross, Christopher and Pamela Rebecca for their shares of the company. I seem to remember that Cliff still owned a part since he had given Elena a proxy to vote for him from jail. No I&#039;m sorry but I don&#039;t think there will be any mentioning of Carlos in this story. I had forgotten about the detail that they had loaned money from him when I wrote this. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/tsmile/emb/t1813.gif"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":embarrassed:" title="Embarrassed&nbsp; &nbsp; :embarrassed:" data-shortname=":embarrassed:" />He was an okay character I agree. But the focus of this story is elsewhere. I&#039;m glad that you found the latest update beautiful. Actually no I don&#039;t mind if you borrow the general idea for a story. I think sometimes we do get inspired by each other as fanfic writers. I know that I borrowed the idea of that JR/SE spent one final night together after she invited him in for tea from one of [USER=262]@Crazy For Sue Ellen[/USER] stories. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />[USER=5055]@CeeCee72[/USER] thank you so much. I take that as a compliment coming from you since I really love your &quot;What If&quot; story. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/misc/m0719.gif"&nbsp; class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":hat:" title="Hat&nbsp; &nbsp; :hat:" data-shortname=":hat:" />I&#039;m glad that you&#039;ve made an exception for my TNT story and I&#039;m impressed that you read it all in one go. I didn&#039;t realize it was that compelling. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />Okay so in tonight&#039;s update Christopher will talk to Pam...*The tension in the room was so thick that it could be cut with a knife. Pam sighed, as she put the coffee cup down since she could sense that this was not just a social call. She then turned to look at her son, “Why don’t you tell me what’s really on your mind?” &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Alright, I want you to drop the lawsuit against my father,” Christopher laid the cards on the table.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Pam bit her lip, since surely here it came, the confrontation she had been dreading, “I’m sorry Christopher but I can’t do that!”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Why not?” Christopher asked. “I thought you didn’t want to get in the middle of all that?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I did but that was before...”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Before what?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Pam sighed, “Before I found out that your father was behind framing your uncle Cliff for JR’s murder,&quot; Pam&#039;s facial expression hardened, as she was determined. &quot;I can never forgive him for what he has done.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp; Christopher gave her a pleading look, “Not even if I ask you to?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “Christopher please...”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No mom, I want my baby’s grandparents to be getting along because if you don’t I can’t invite you to family functions. Do you really want to miss out on your grandchild’s baptizing?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “You really would do that?” Pam asked, her bottom lip quivering ever so slightly. “After everything I’ve been through you still want to exclude me?”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I don’t want to,” Christopher sighed heavily since this was very difficult for him. “But you are putting me in an impossible position here. I mean dad raised me single handedly so naturally I am closer to him and...”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I see,” Pam said sadly.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “I’m sorry mom,” Christopher said. “I don’t want to get stuck in the middle of you and dad either but unless you forgive him I really can’t have you at my baby’s baptizing.”&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “So unless I’ll forgive Bobby I’m losing my son again?” Pam asked with tears in her eyes.&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; “No,” Christopher shook his head. “You won’t lose me. I promise I’ll still be in your life and I’ll bring by the baby to meet you. But you’ll have to miss out on the family stuff and it sucks since I want you to be there,” Christopher admitted. “So please mom I’m begging you to drop this lawsuit and forgive my father so that we can be a family again,” Christopher said seriously and seeing the pleading look in her son’s brown eyes Pam sighed heavily since she knew that he was right. She had missed too many years of her son’s life so she really didn’t want to miss any of the important milestones with her grandchild. Yet at the same time she hated Bobby for what he’d done to Cliff and she resented him for giving up on them after she had been kidnapped. So she just didn’t know if she could find it in her heart to forgive him.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 218854"] Thank you everyone for the feedback. I appreciate that you took the time to tell me what you think of my story. :) I'm sorry the last update made you cry. But I think it says more about how invested we are in JR/SE's story than about my writing skills. I remember the first time I saw the episode when Sue Ellen was about to find out JR was cheating on her again with Holly Harwood. I didn't want her to find out since I didn't want JR/SE's marriage to be ruined. So I was literally screaming at the TV and jumping up and down, since I found that so suspenseful! I saw it in reruns so I was 14 at the time... [USER=130]@stevew[/USER] I'm glad that the IPO didn't make it that clear who owned the company since then my idea of that Bobby and Sue Ellen owns 50/50 still works. But I agree with you that they should have compensated John Ross, Christopher and Pamela Rebecca for their shares of the company. I seem to remember that Cliff still owned a part since he had given Elena a proxy to vote for him from jail. No I'm sorry but I don't think there will be any mentioning of Carlos in this story. I had forgotten about the detail that they had loaned money from him when I wrote this. :embarrassed: He was an okay character I agree. But the focus of this story is elsewhere. I'm glad that you found the latest update beautiful. Actually no I don't mind if you borrow the general idea for a story. I think sometimes we do get inspired by each other as fanfic writers. I know that I borrowed the idea of that JR/SE spent one final night together after she invited him in for tea from one of [USER=262]@Crazy For Sue Ellen[/USER] stories. :) [USER=5055]@CeeCee72[/USER] thank you so much. I take that as a compliment coming from you since I really love your "What If" story. :hat: I'm glad that you've made an exception for my TNT story and I'm impressed that you read it all in one go. I didn't realize it was that compelling. :) Okay so in tonight's update Christopher will talk to Pam... * The tension in the room was so thick that it could be cut with a knife. Pam sighed, as she put the coffee cup down since she could sense that this was not just a social call. She then turned to look at her son, “Why don’t you tell me what’s really on your mind?” “Alright, I want you to drop the lawsuit against my father,” Christopher laid the cards on the table. Pam bit her lip, since surely here it came, the confrontation she had been dreading, “I’m sorry Christopher but I can’t do that!” “Why not?” Christopher asked. “I thought you didn’t want to get in the middle of all that?” “I did but that was before...” “Before what?” Pam sighed, “Before I found out that your father was behind framing your uncle Cliff for JR’s murder," Pam's facial expression hardened, as she was determined. "I can never forgive him for what he has done.” Christopher gave her a pleading look, “Not even if I ask you to?” “Christopher please...” “No mom, I want my baby’s grandparents to be getting along because if you don’t I can’t invite you to family functions. Do you really want to miss out on your grandchild’s baptizing?” “You really would do that?” Pam asked, her bottom lip quivering ever so slightly. “After everything I’ve been through you still want to exclude me?” “I don’t want to,” Christopher sighed heavily since this was very difficult for him. “But you are putting me in an impossible position here. I mean dad raised me single handedly so naturally I am closer to him and...” “I see,” Pam said sadly. “I’m sorry mom,” Christopher said. “I don’t want to get stuck in the middle of you and dad either but unless you forgive him I really can’t have you at my baby’s baptizing.” “So unless I’ll forgive Bobby I’m losing my son again?” Pam asked with tears in her eyes. “No,” Christopher shook his head. “You won’t lose me. I promise I’ll still be in your life and I’ll bring by the baby to meet you. But you’ll have to miss out on the family stuff and it sucks since I want you to be there,” Christopher admitted. “So please mom I’m begging you to drop this lawsuit and forgive my father so that we can be a family again,” Christopher said seriously and seeing the pleading look in her son’s brown eyes Pam sighed heavily since she knew that he was right. She had missed too many years of her son’s life so she really didn’t want to miss any of the important milestones with her grandchild. Yet at the same time she hated Bobby for what he’d done to Cliff and she resented him for giving up on them after she had been kidnapped. So she just didn’t know if she could find it in her heart to forgive him. [/QUOTE]

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