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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 219292"><p>Thank you everyone for the feedback. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p>I understand why you [USER=130]@stevew[/USER] and [USER=5055]@CeeCee72[/USER] are both rooting for it to be Christopher's baby. It would be the best for everyone involved if that turned out to be the case.</p><p>You will find out soonish who the father is.</p><p></p><p>[USER=56]@Mrs Bobby James Ewing[/USER] thank you. I am flattered that you prefer my story to Dallas TNT. I think the first season of Dallas TNT was actually really great. It was later on when JR died that the show lost it's focus and went into crime drama territority that it went downhill. Anyway you might get some of what you wish for since the birth of a new grandbaby is an event that will bind them closer together.</p><p></p><p>But before the baby is born let's see what Emma and Lucas are up to...</p><p></p><p>*</p><p></p><p></p><p> The nightclub was already quite crowded, even though it wasn’t even midnight yet. A lot of people were enjoying their after ski, drinking beer, singing along to the loud party music and some of them were dancing too. There was also a steady supply of coke for anyone who would want it and Emma’s friends certainly did. They were already high by the time Lucas and Emma arrived at the nightclub. Emma didn’t mind though as she was happy to see her friends but Lucas was not as amused. After less than twenty minutes in her friends company he made himself scarce, “Why don’t I go and get us some drinks?” Lucas excused himself. “So what do you want?”</p><p></p><p> “Sex on the beach,” Emma smiled and all her friends giggled. </p><p></p><p> “What?” Lucas repeated, as he wasn’t familiar with that drink. “You want to...”</p><p></p><p> “No it’s a drink silly,” Emma said.</p><p></p><p> “Oh okay. I’ll be right back then,” Lucas said before he walked off towards the bar, leaving Emma all alone with her friends.</p><p></p><p> “So Emma, hot guy,” One of Emma’s best friends Veronica said. “So what’s he like in bed?”</p><p></p><p> Emma swallowed and not wanting to admit that she hadn’t slept with the guy yet she just smiled, “That’s for me to know and for you to never find out!”</p><p></p><p> “Oh come on Emma don’t be such a bore,” Another of her friends named Susie said. “Tell us!”</p><p></p><p> “No seriously, I’d rather not talk about that,” Emma said.</p><p></p><p> “Oh I know what’s wrong,” Veronica said as she picked up some coke from her purse and handed it to Emma, “You are just cranky since you haven’t taken your medicine yet!”</p><p> “Veronica seriously,” Emma said. “You’re still doing coke?”</p><p></p><p> “Don’t tell me you’re not?” Veronica said.</p><p></p><p> “Yeah don’t be such a bore Emma, take it and then spill, we wanna know all about you and that hunk you brought to the party,” Another friends named Megan said.</p><p></p><p> “Okay,” Emma said and took the coke from Veronica, just as Lucas was returning from the bar with the drinks.</p><p></p><p> “Here you go,” Lucas handed Emma her drink.</p><p></p><p> Emma then gulped down the whole thing in one go, while her friends were cheering her on. “Drink! Bottom up!”</p><p></p><p> “Done,” Emma grinned, as she wiped her mouth. She intended to get stinking drunk tonight. It might ease her nerves. She had decided to sleep with Lucas tonight but since a part of her still wasn’t comfortable with the idea of being intimate with a guy again after being raped she thought that maybe being drunk would help her. Or better yet, drunk and doped. “So why don’t you come with me to the bathroom?” Emma put two fingers in between Lucas’ shirt and gave him her best seductive look.</p><p></p><p> “You want me to join you in the bathroom?” Lucas looked surprised at Emma.</p><p></p><p> “Yeah I promise I’ll make it worth your while if you come,” Emma smiled at Lucas before she leant forward and gave him a kiss in front of all her friends. Feeling embarrassed Lucas was left with no choice but to go with her.</p><p></p><p> “Alright let’s go,” he said before he walked with Emma into the bathroom. Once they were in there he turned to look at her, “Emma what is going on?” He asked her in a concerned voice. “Why are you in such a hurry getting drunk tonight?”</p><p></p><p> “What?” Emma pouted. “Can’t a girl enjoy a few drinks?”</p><p></p><p> “Sure but the way you gulped down that drink like a teenager is hardly attractive,” Lucas said. “I mean it will go straight to your head!”</p><p></p><p> “That’s the point,” Emma said. “I wanna get stinking drunk tonight!”</p><p></p><p> “I get that but why?”</p><p></p><p> “Because if I’m drunk I might work up the courage to sleep with you tonight,” Emma confessed. It was the alcohol talking as she hadn’t planned to reveal that much.</p><p></p><p> “I’m not gonna have sex with you in the bathroom,” Lucas told her.</p><p></p><p> “You’re not?” Emma asked.</p><p></p><p> “No. What have your friends done to you?” He asked. “You are acting no better than a school girl.”</p><p></p><p> “Are you saying I am immature?” Emma pouted.</p><p></p><p> “Frankly yes,” Lucas said.</p><p></p><p> “Bull, now just because of that I won’t share my candy with you,” Emma said. “I was gonna share it but...”</p><p></p><p> “What candy?” Lucas asked.</p><p></p><p> “This candy,” Emma said holding up the coke.</p><p></p><p> Realizing what it was Lucas eyes widened, “But Emma that’s cocaine!”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah so?” Emma asked.</p><p></p><p> “Are you out of your mind!” Lucas said. “You can’t mix drugs and alcohol it could kill you!”</p><p></p><p> “It hasn’t so far,” Emma said.</p><p></p><p> “So far?” Lucas asked. “Emma how long have you been doing drugs?”</p><p></p><p> “Since I was 16,” Emma replied and seeing the disgusted look on Lucas face she dropped her mask. “And why do I get a feeling you don’t approve?”</p><p></p><p> “Because I don’t,” Lucas said. “I don’t do drugs. It’s only for idiots!” </p><p></p><p> Hearing that knocked some sense into her and Emma sighed before she admitted, “I know, I have been clean for a year now!”</p><p></p><p> “Then why do you want to throw that away?”</p><p></p><p> “I don’t know,” Emma shrugged her shoulders. “Some habits are hard to break I guess. I mean when I hang with the girls we’ve always done drugs.”</p><p></p><p> “So it’s about peer pressure?”</p><p></p><p> “No it’s about me,” Emma said. “I need to get high tonight or I might be chicken out.”</p><p></p><p> “Chicken out?”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah of sleeping with you,” Emma clarified.</p><p></p><p> “Well sorry to burst your bubble, but we are not gonna have sex tonight.”</p><p></p><p> “Why not?” Emma asked. “Don’t you find me attractive?”</p><p></p><p> “Very but you are already drunk and I don’t want to take advantage of that.” </p><p></p><p> “Oh a gentleman at last,” Emma purred.</p><p></p><p> “Now give me the drugs Emma,” Lucas reached for her hand.</p><p></p><p> “What for?”</p><p></p><p> “So I can flush them in the toilet,” Lucas clarified.</p><p></p><p> “You can’t do that,” Emma said. “Don’t you know how valuable this stuff is!”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah but so is your health Emma,” Lucas pointed out. “Now give me the drugs before you’ll end up using again. You know you will regret it in the morning if you do!”</p><p></p><p> “Who made you my baby sitter?” Emma asked sarcastically.</p><p></p><p> “There no need to be rude,” Lucas said, “I am only trying to help you.”</p><p></p><p> “I know,” Emma said before she capitulated and gave Lucas the drugs. Lucas then proceeded with throwing them into the toilet.</p><p></p><p> “You do know that you are flushing down thousands of dollars right?”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah but it’s better to get rid of this than to get caught with it on us,” Lucas said. “I don’t feel like going to jail and I bet you don’t either.”</p><p></p><p> “True,” Emma said.</p><p></p><p> Lucas then flushed the last of the drugs and then when he was done he took Emma’s hand and said. “Now let’s go!”</p><p></p><p> “Go where?”</p><p></p><p> “Home,” Lucas replied.</p><p></p><p> “But we can’t leave now,” Emma objected. “The party is just starting to get good.”</p><p></p><p> “Well all the more reason to go,” Lucas said. “Now are you coming or do you want me to leave without you?”</p><p></p><p> “Alright, I’m coming,” Emma said with a sigh. “But I wanna say goodbye to my friends first.”</p><p></p><p> “Fine,” Lucas said before he put his arms around her shoulders and they walked back to her friends, exchanged a few words and then left the nightclub together.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 219292"] Thank you everyone for the feedback. :) I understand why you [USER=130]@stevew[/USER] and [USER=5055]@CeeCee72[/USER] are both rooting for it to be Christopher's baby. It would be the best for everyone involved if that turned out to be the case. You will find out soonish who the father is. [USER=56]@Mrs Bobby James Ewing[/USER] thank you. I am flattered that you prefer my story to Dallas TNT. I think the first season of Dallas TNT was actually really great. It was later on when JR died that the show lost it's focus and went into crime drama territority that it went downhill. Anyway you might get some of what you wish for since the birth of a new grandbaby is an event that will bind them closer together. But before the baby is born let's see what Emma and Lucas are up to... * The nightclub was already quite crowded, even though it wasn’t even midnight yet. A lot of people were enjoying their after ski, drinking beer, singing along to the loud party music and some of them were dancing too. There was also a steady supply of coke for anyone who would want it and Emma’s friends certainly did. They were already high by the time Lucas and Emma arrived at the nightclub. Emma didn’t mind though as she was happy to see her friends but Lucas was not as amused. After less than twenty minutes in her friends company he made himself scarce, “Why don’t I go and get us some drinks?” Lucas excused himself. “So what do you want?” “Sex on the beach,” Emma smiled and all her friends giggled. “What?” Lucas repeated, as he wasn’t familiar with that drink. “You want to...” “No it’s a drink silly,” Emma said. “Oh okay. I’ll be right back then,” Lucas said before he walked off towards the bar, leaving Emma all alone with her friends. “So Emma, hot guy,” One of Emma’s best friends Veronica said. “So what’s he like in bed?” Emma swallowed and not wanting to admit that she hadn’t slept with the guy yet she just smiled, “That’s for me to know and for you to never find out!” “Oh come on Emma don’t be such a bore,” Another of her friends named Susie said. “Tell us!” “No seriously, I’d rather not talk about that,” Emma said. “Oh I know what’s wrong,” Veronica said as she picked up some coke from her purse and handed it to Emma, “You are just cranky since you haven’t taken your medicine yet!” “Veronica seriously,” Emma said. “You’re still doing coke?” “Don’t tell me you’re not?” Veronica said. “Yeah don’t be such a bore Emma, take it and then spill, we wanna know all about you and that hunk you brought to the party,” Another friends named Megan said. “Okay,” Emma said and took the coke from Veronica, just as Lucas was returning from the bar with the drinks. “Here you go,” Lucas handed Emma her drink. Emma then gulped down the whole thing in one go, while her friends were cheering her on. “Drink! Bottom up!” “Done,” Emma grinned, as she wiped her mouth. She intended to get stinking drunk tonight. It might ease her nerves. She had decided to sleep with Lucas tonight but since a part of her still wasn’t comfortable with the idea of being intimate with a guy again after being raped she thought that maybe being drunk would help her. Or better yet, drunk and doped. “So why don’t you come with me to the bathroom?” Emma put two fingers in between Lucas’ shirt and gave him her best seductive look. “You want me to join you in the bathroom?” Lucas looked surprised at Emma. “Yeah I promise I’ll make it worth your while if you come,” Emma smiled at Lucas before she leant forward and gave him a kiss in front of all her friends. Feeling embarrassed Lucas was left with no choice but to go with her. “Alright let’s go,” he said before he walked with Emma into the bathroom. Once they were in there he turned to look at her, “Emma what is going on?” He asked her in a concerned voice. “Why are you in such a hurry getting drunk tonight?” “What?” Emma pouted. “Can’t a girl enjoy a few drinks?” “Sure but the way you gulped down that drink like a teenager is hardly attractive,” Lucas said. “I mean it will go straight to your head!” “That’s the point,” Emma said. “I wanna get stinking drunk tonight!” “I get that but why?” “Because if I’m drunk I might work up the courage to sleep with you tonight,” Emma confessed. It was the alcohol talking as she hadn’t planned to reveal that much. “I’m not gonna have sex with you in the bathroom,” Lucas told her. “You’re not?” Emma asked. “No. What have your friends done to you?” He asked. “You are acting no better than a school girl.” “Are you saying I am immature?” Emma pouted. “Frankly yes,” Lucas said. “Bull, now just because of that I won’t share my candy with you,” Emma said. “I was gonna share it but...” “What candy?” Lucas asked. “This candy,” Emma said holding up the coke. Realizing what it was Lucas eyes widened, “But Emma that’s cocaine!” “Yeah so?” Emma asked. “Are you out of your mind!” Lucas said. “You can’t mix drugs and alcohol it could kill you!” “It hasn’t so far,” Emma said. “So far?” Lucas asked. “Emma how long have you been doing drugs?” “Since I was 16,” Emma replied and seeing the disgusted look on Lucas face she dropped her mask. “And why do I get a feeling you don’t approve?” “Because I don’t,” Lucas said. “I don’t do drugs. It’s only for idiots!” Hearing that knocked some sense into her and Emma sighed before she admitted, “I know, I have been clean for a year now!” “Then why do you want to throw that away?” “I don’t know,” Emma shrugged her shoulders. “Some habits are hard to break I guess. I mean when I hang with the girls we’ve always done drugs.” “So it’s about peer pressure?” “No it’s about me,” Emma said. “I need to get high tonight or I might be chicken out.” “Chicken out?” “Yeah of sleeping with you,” Emma clarified. “Well sorry to burst your bubble, but we are not gonna have sex tonight.” “Why not?” Emma asked. “Don’t you find me attractive?” “Very but you are already drunk and I don’t want to take advantage of that.” “Oh a gentleman at last,” Emma purred. “Now give me the drugs Emma,” Lucas reached for her hand. “What for?” “So I can flush them in the toilet,” Lucas clarified. “You can’t do that,” Emma said. “Don’t you know how valuable this stuff is!” “Yeah but so is your health Emma,” Lucas pointed out. “Now give me the drugs before you’ll end up using again. You know you will regret it in the morning if you do!” “Who made you my baby sitter?” Emma asked sarcastically. “There no need to be rude,” Lucas said, “I am only trying to help you.” “I know,” Emma said before she capitulated and gave Lucas the drugs. Lucas then proceeded with throwing them into the toilet. “You do know that you are flushing down thousands of dollars right?” “Yeah but it’s better to get rid of this than to get caught with it on us,” Lucas said. “I don’t feel like going to jail and I bet you don’t either.” “True,” Emma said. Lucas then flushed the last of the drugs and then when he was done he took Emma’s hand and said. “Now let’s go!” “Go where?” “Home,” Lucas replied. “But we can’t leave now,” Emma objected. “The party is just starting to get good.” “Well all the more reason to go,” Lucas said. “Now are you coming or do you want me to leave without you?” “Alright, I’m coming,” Emma said with a sigh. “But I wanna say goodbye to my friends first.” “Fine,” Lucas said before he put his arms around her shoulders and they walked back to her friends, exchanged a few words and then left the nightclub together. [/QUOTE]
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