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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 224234"><p>Thank you [USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] I am glad that you think the scene was worth the wait. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>Here's tonight's update. </p><p></p><p>*</p><p></p><p> The tension was so thick that it could be cut with a knife. They were sitting in the living room having coffee and cookies, as Jenna and Ray were trying their best to be nice to Emma’s parents but the situation was obviously strained. Jenna had deliberately avoided all family gatherings in Dallas for years. Not that she didn’t like the Ewing family but because it had been too painful for her to see Bobby. She knew that he was Ray’s brother so she’d let him go and visit them every now and then. But she had stayed away. At first Miss Ellie and Clayton had visited them in Europe. Probably more to see Lucas than her, but then they had gotten too sick to travel. She’d attended Miss Ellie’s funeral, after all the woman had been like a second mother to her. But then Bobby had gotten married again and after that she’d avoided all family functions.</p><p></p><p> She had even missed out on JR’s funeral. Not because she disliked the man really, but because she didn’t want to be confronted with Bobby. She knew it was just too painful to see her first love. It was bad enough that she saw him every time she looked at their son. Yes she had let Ray adopt her kids, so on paper everything was nice and tidy. She and Ray had three kids, Charlie, Lucas and Katie. But deep down in her heart she knew that it was really only Katie who was Ray’s biological child. Not that Ray had ever treated the kids any differently. He seemed to love all of their kids the same. He did have a weak spot for Maggie though. Probably because she reminded him of Donna in the same way as Lucas reminded her of Bobby. But unlike Bobby, Ray hadn’t given up on his daughter. He had insisted on being a part of Maggie’s life and of being a father to her, whereas Bobby had just given up all his rights to Lucas and even let his brother adopt him. There were times when Jenna resented him for that even though she knew it had been the best thing for her and Ray’s marriage. Still to be confronted with Bobby’s wife was awkward for Jenna. So awkward in fact that she soon came up with an excuse to leave them alone. “So anyone want more coffee or some wine maybe?”</p><p></p><p> “I wouldn’t mind some wine,” Harris said.</p><p></p><p> “Great choice, it’s from our vineyard,” Ray said. “We store it in our own wine cellar.”</p><p></p><p> “I thought you were breeding horses,” Ann said.</p><p></p><p> “I am, the vineyard is just a hobby, so we have a few plants that’s all,” Ray said.</p><p></p><p> “Yeah but at least it’s enough to make a couple of bottles of our own wine every year,” Jenna said.</p><p></p><p> “Sounds great, maybe you’d like to show it to us?” Harris said.</p><p></p><p> “Sure,” Ray said.</p><p></p><p> “Actually Harris I’d rather stay here if you don’t mind,” Ann said. “I would like to talk to Ray about something.”</p><p></p><p> “Okay,” Harris said before he turned to Jenna, “Then I guess it’s up to you to give me a tour of the vineyard if you don’t mind.” </p><p></p><p> “I don’t mind,” Jenna smiled, relieved to have gotten an excuse to get away from Bobby’s wife. “In fact I think some fresh air will do me some good.”</p><p></p><p> “Fine then you’ll show him the vineyard while I catch up with Ann here,” Ray said. </p><p></p><p> “Okay, see you in a bit honey,” Jenna said before she and Harris got up and left the room. </p><p></p><p>Once Ray and Ann were all alone together Ann turned to Ray with a pleading look in her eyes, “Ray I want you to do something for me and it’s very important that you do exactly as I tell you, okay?”</p><p></p><p> “That depends on what it is you want me to do,” Ray said.</p><p></p><p> “I want you to promise me that you won’t tell Bobby that I’m here with Harris.”</p><p></p><p> “What?” Ray said. “You want me to lie to my own brother?”</p><p></p><p> “No,” Ann shook her head. “I just want you not to mention it.”</p><p></p><p> “I don’t think I can do that,” Ray sighed. “I mean Bobby’s my brother and I think he deserves to know where his wife is and which company she keeps.”</p><p></p><p> “Well Bobby already knows that I’m in Switzerland.”</p><p></p><p> “But not that you’re here with Harris,” Ray saw right through her.</p><p></p><p> “No,” Ann shook her head. “I think it’s better if he hears that from me so I appreciate it if you don’t tell him.”</p><p></p><p> “Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t.”</p><p></p><p> “Well I don’t want him to jump to the wrong conclusions and he might do that if he hears about it from someone else. So please Ray, I am begging you not to tell Bobby.”</p><p></p><p> “Alright then,” Ray sighed. “But I really think you ought to talk to Bobby and tell him the truth since he is my brother and I don’t like him being lied to.”</p><p></p><p> “I don’t like lying to Bobby either,” Ann sighed. “It’s just that Bobby hates Harris so if he finds out that I’m here with him it will only hurt him.”</p><p></p><p> “I’m sure it will,” Ray said. “So I won’t say anything.”</p><p></p><p> “Good since I don’t think my marriage could handle any more stress right now,” Ann said.</p><p></p><p> “What happened?” Ray asked. “I thought you and Bobby were happy together.”</p><p></p><p> “So did I but that was before she showed up,” Ann said.</p><p></p><p> “Who?”</p><p></p><p> “The first Mrs. Ewing,” Ann said and Ray dropped his cheek.</p><p></p><p> “Surely you can’t mean Pam,” He asked surprised.</p><p></p><p> “Oh yes I sure can,” Ann said. “See that woman came back to Dallas for her brother’s funeral and ever since then Bobby’s been like a changed man. It’s like our whole marriage has gone off track and he barely pays any attention to me anymore. All he ever talks about is Pam.”</p><p></p><p> “I’m sorry to hear that,” Ray said.</p><p></p><p> “I just wish that woman never would have returned as she’s ruining my marriage.”</p><p></p><p> “Well aren’t you a little too harsh?” Ray said. “I mean it takes two people to ruin a marriage so you can’t put all the blame on Bobby and certainly not on Pam. I mean Pam has gone through a lot and...”</p><p></p><p> There Ray was suddenly interrupted by his wife who had walked back into the room without them noticing her, “Pam’s not dead?” Jenna asked in disbelief, as she was truly shocked to find out that the other woman was still alive.</p><p></p><p> “Jenna what are you doing back already?” Ray asked. “I thought you were showing Harris the vineyard.”</p><p></p><p> “I was but it’s a very small vineyard,” Jenna said before looking at Ann, “So Bobby’s seeing Pam again, huh?”</p><p></p><p> “Well I asked him not to see her but...”</p><p></p><p> “Good, a word of advice, if you value your marriage you’d better keep him as far away from that woman as possible. He’s obsessed with her.”</p><p></p><p> “Thanks I’ve started to notice that,” Ann said. “Still I am sure it’s not that bad. I mean Bobby’s reassured me that she won’t come between us.” </p><p></p><p> “Well take it from someone who’s been there,” Jenna said. “Bobby can’t be trusted whereas Pam is concerned. In fact I’m willing to bet my last dollar on that he’s together with her right now!” Jenna said in bitter tone of voice and Ann looked upset at the implication.</p><p></p><p> “You have to excuse my wife,” Ray said. “She’s just upset because she’s had a fall out with Bobby after Miss Ellie died.”</p><p></p><p> “It’s more than that Ray,” Jenna said.</p><p></p><p> “Anything you wanna talk about?” Ann asked.</p><p></p><p> “Not really,” Jenna said. “But I would keep my eye on my husband if I were you and never ever leave him alone with Pam because the moment you let your guard down that’s when she will be making her move,” Jenna said.</p><p></p><p> “Thanks but that’s not necessary. Bobby told me he’s over Pam,” Ann said.</p><p></p><p> “No offense, but Bobby will never be over Pam,” Jenna insisted and Ann gave her a weird look. She could pick up on the strange vibe in the air between them. There was a tension. But she had assumed that it was because she and Harris had just showed up uninvited on their doorstep. But from the way Jenna spoke now she got the feeling that it had more to do with the other woman being jealous of her marriage. Yet when she looked at Jenna and Ray she couldn’t for the life of her figure out why, as it seemed to her like they had the picture perfect marriage. So no matter of how much she tried Ann couldn’t figure out why Jenna cared that much about Bobby. What was even worse was that Jenna’s word had reminded her of that she’d left her husband alone at home and knowing that his ex was lurking in the wings, waiting to take center stage at the first opportunity that presented itself, she couldn’t help but thinking that maybe she had made a serious mistake when she’d rushed off to Europe with Harris.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 224234"] Thank you [USER=72]@Pammy P[/USER] I am glad that you think the scene was worth the wait. :) Here's tonight's update. * The tension was so thick that it could be cut with a knife. They were sitting in the living room having coffee and cookies, as Jenna and Ray were trying their best to be nice to Emma’s parents but the situation was obviously strained. Jenna had deliberately avoided all family gatherings in Dallas for years. Not that she didn’t like the Ewing family but because it had been too painful for her to see Bobby. She knew that he was Ray’s brother so she’d let him go and visit them every now and then. But she had stayed away. At first Miss Ellie and Clayton had visited them in Europe. Probably more to see Lucas than her, but then they had gotten too sick to travel. She’d attended Miss Ellie’s funeral, after all the woman had been like a second mother to her. But then Bobby had gotten married again and after that she’d avoided all family functions. She had even missed out on JR’s funeral. Not because she disliked the man really, but because she didn’t want to be confronted with Bobby. She knew it was just too painful to see her first love. It was bad enough that she saw him every time she looked at their son. Yes she had let Ray adopt her kids, so on paper everything was nice and tidy. She and Ray had three kids, Charlie, Lucas and Katie. But deep down in her heart she knew that it was really only Katie who was Ray’s biological child. Not that Ray had ever treated the kids any differently. He seemed to love all of their kids the same. He did have a weak spot for Maggie though. Probably because she reminded him of Donna in the same way as Lucas reminded her of Bobby. But unlike Bobby, Ray hadn’t given up on his daughter. He had insisted on being a part of Maggie’s life and of being a father to her, whereas Bobby had just given up all his rights to Lucas and even let his brother adopt him. There were times when Jenna resented him for that even though she knew it had been the best thing for her and Ray’s marriage. Still to be confronted with Bobby’s wife was awkward for Jenna. So awkward in fact that she soon came up with an excuse to leave them alone. “So anyone want more coffee or some wine maybe?” “I wouldn’t mind some wine,” Harris said. “Great choice, it’s from our vineyard,” Ray said. “We store it in our own wine cellar.” “I thought you were breeding horses,” Ann said. “I am, the vineyard is just a hobby, so we have a few plants that’s all,” Ray said. “Yeah but at least it’s enough to make a couple of bottles of our own wine every year,” Jenna said. “Sounds great, maybe you’d like to show it to us?” Harris said. “Sure,” Ray said. “Actually Harris I’d rather stay here if you don’t mind,” Ann said. “I would like to talk to Ray about something.” “Okay,” Harris said before he turned to Jenna, “Then I guess it’s up to you to give me a tour of the vineyard if you don’t mind.” “I don’t mind,” Jenna smiled, relieved to have gotten an excuse to get away from Bobby’s wife. “In fact I think some fresh air will do me some good.” “Fine then you’ll show him the vineyard while I catch up with Ann here,” Ray said. “Okay, see you in a bit honey,” Jenna said before she and Harris got up and left the room. Once Ray and Ann were all alone together Ann turned to Ray with a pleading look in her eyes, “Ray I want you to do something for me and it’s very important that you do exactly as I tell you, okay?” “That depends on what it is you want me to do,” Ray said. “I want you to promise me that you won’t tell Bobby that I’m here with Harris.” “What?” Ray said. “You want me to lie to my own brother?” “No,” Ann shook her head. “I just want you not to mention it.” “I don’t think I can do that,” Ray sighed. “I mean Bobby’s my brother and I think he deserves to know where his wife is and which company she keeps.” “Well Bobby already knows that I’m in Switzerland.” “But not that you’re here with Harris,” Ray saw right through her. “No,” Ann shook her head. “I think it’s better if he hears that from me so I appreciate it if you don’t tell him.” “Give me one good reason why I shouldn’t.” “Well I don’t want him to jump to the wrong conclusions and he might do that if he hears about it from someone else. So please Ray, I am begging you not to tell Bobby.” “Alright then,” Ray sighed. “But I really think you ought to talk to Bobby and tell him the truth since he is my brother and I don’t like him being lied to.” “I don’t like lying to Bobby either,” Ann sighed. “It’s just that Bobby hates Harris so if he finds out that I’m here with him it will only hurt him.” “I’m sure it will,” Ray said. “So I won’t say anything.” “Good since I don’t think my marriage could handle any more stress right now,” Ann said. “What happened?” Ray asked. “I thought you and Bobby were happy together.” “So did I but that was before she showed up,” Ann said. “Who?” “The first Mrs. Ewing,” Ann said and Ray dropped his cheek. “Surely you can’t mean Pam,” He asked surprised. “Oh yes I sure can,” Ann said. “See that woman came back to Dallas for her brother’s funeral and ever since then Bobby’s been like a changed man. It’s like our whole marriage has gone off track and he barely pays any attention to me anymore. All he ever talks about is Pam.” “I’m sorry to hear that,” Ray said. “I just wish that woman never would have returned as she’s ruining my marriage.” “Well aren’t you a little too harsh?” Ray said. “I mean it takes two people to ruin a marriage so you can’t put all the blame on Bobby and certainly not on Pam. I mean Pam has gone through a lot and...” There Ray was suddenly interrupted by his wife who had walked back into the room without them noticing her, “Pam’s not dead?” Jenna asked in disbelief, as she was truly shocked to find out that the other woman was still alive. “Jenna what are you doing back already?” Ray asked. “I thought you were showing Harris the vineyard.” “I was but it’s a very small vineyard,” Jenna said before looking at Ann, “So Bobby’s seeing Pam again, huh?” “Well I asked him not to see her but...” “Good, a word of advice, if you value your marriage you’d better keep him as far away from that woman as possible. He’s obsessed with her.” “Thanks I’ve started to notice that,” Ann said. “Still I am sure it’s not that bad. I mean Bobby’s reassured me that she won’t come between us.” “Well take it from someone who’s been there,” Jenna said. “Bobby can’t be trusted whereas Pam is concerned. In fact I’m willing to bet my last dollar on that he’s together with her right now!” Jenna said in bitter tone of voice and Ann looked upset at the implication. “You have to excuse my wife,” Ray said. “She’s just upset because she’s had a fall out with Bobby after Miss Ellie died.” “It’s more than that Ray,” Jenna said. “Anything you wanna talk about?” Ann asked. “Not really,” Jenna said. “But I would keep my eye on my husband if I were you and never ever leave him alone with Pam because the moment you let your guard down that’s when she will be making her move,” Jenna said. “Thanks but that’s not necessary. Bobby told me he’s over Pam,” Ann said. “No offense, but Bobby will never be over Pam,” Jenna insisted and Ann gave her a weird look. She could pick up on the strange vibe in the air between them. There was a tension. But she had assumed that it was because she and Harris had just showed up uninvited on their doorstep. But from the way Jenna spoke now she got the feeling that it had more to do with the other woman being jealous of her marriage. Yet when she looked at Jenna and Ray she couldn’t for the life of her figure out why, as it seemed to her like they had the picture perfect marriage. So no matter of how much she tried Ann couldn’t figure out why Jenna cared that much about Bobby. What was even worse was that Jenna’s word had reminded her of that she’d left her husband alone at home and knowing that his ex was lurking in the wings, waiting to take center stage at the first opportunity that presented itself, she couldn’t help but thinking that maybe she had made a serious mistake when she’d rushed off to Europe with Harris. [/QUOTE]
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