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<blockquote data-quote="stevew" data-source="post: 59194" data-attributes="member: 130"><p>Tombstone (1993) comparisons:</p><p></p><p>Virgil: Lucas - moral center </p><p></p><p>Wyatt: Mysha - protagonist </p><p></p><p>Morgan: Nicolás - fun loving, light hearted, younger brother in trouble </p><p></p><p>Doc: Juan - sidekick (of Virgil, more in regards to Wyatt) </p><p></p><p>Josephine: Sofia - fun loving love interest (in this case the love interest of Virgil) </p><p></p><p>Curly Bill: Marvin Anderson - antagonist (sociopath). Note: Gene Hackman or Powers Boothe in the role </p><p></p><p>Johnny Ringo: Beck - antagonist (psychopath) </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Juan sits at a table in a hole in the wall bar drinking, smoking and playing cards. Lucas sits down and puts his money on the table. "Anyone get in on this action?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Not anyone but you sure can. I'll take your money from you any day." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Fellas. He cleaning house again?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>The one guys says, "Sure is." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Sugar," he says to the waitress, "Bourbon and Branch." </p><p></p><p></p><p>A man approaches the table, "Krebs. What's this I hear you poisoned the water." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"I didn't poison no water and besides you got a well out at your place. They're just talking water in town."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Hear tell you poisoned the ground water."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Well that water makes it to me before it gets to you so that'd make me an idiot. You ain't callin' me an idiot are you?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Listen you son of a bitch."</p><p></p><p></p><p>Juan says, "Don't go talking about his Madre like that." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Ok what? I ain't afraid of you."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Yes you are. You're sweatin' Line a stuck pig. Now go away."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Make me."</p><p></p><p></p><p>Lucas says, "Let's just calm down. We're just playin' some cards. I've got people looking to get to the bottom of what happened with water." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Screw your people." The man lunges for Lucas and Juan jumps before anything happens shoving him down. Pretty soon the whole bar has broken out in a fight. </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>A limousine pulls up at the police station and a looking worst for the wear Lucas and Juan get in back. A man sits across from them (played by Dennis Haysbert). "We don't have the proof but, but I'm certain Marvin Anderson's son, what'll they call him? Beck. He's behind the water."</p><p></p><p></p><p>Lucas says, "His father put him up to it?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"No I'm positive that didn't happen."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Why you so sure?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Gone through emails and phone calls. Got everything around him bugged. We don't make mistakes."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"No I suppose not."</p><p></p><p></p><p>Juan says, "But you won't give us the proof we need to handle Beck Anderson?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"That's not gonna happen. We will give you a fall guy."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"You're asking a lot out of me in exchange for a fall guy."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"He use to work in Senator Anderson's office. It'll open up an investigation and the Senator will be tainted. He's the one we're really worried about anyway." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"And why's that?" </p><p></p><p></p><p>"He's tied into what we need your help with." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Pushing the price of feed up."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"We've got a couple others on the line with you." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"I'm sure I can guess who. So we do what you ask and then what? The Russians blink?" The man doesn't answer. "You are talking about effecting the Russian economy. I spoke to my cousin, John Ross, he's expecting another drop in oil prices now that the President's eased up on federal leases. You're after the Russian Economy." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Do we have a deal Mr. Krebs?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"It's Ewing. Lucas Ewing." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Do we have a deal?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Yes." </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Lucas and Juan step out of the car as a pick up truck arrives along side of them. Bobby and Ray get out. "Who was that?" Bobby asks. </p><p></p><p></p><p>"And old friend," Lucas answers. </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Bailed us out," Juan says. </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>In the kitchen at Pradera Sofia bandages himself up while Bobby helps Juan. They recount what happens and even Bobby says he wishes he'd been there, Sofia admonishes, "Bobby."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Does a man a lot of good once and a while to get in a fight. Ain't that right Ray?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"If you say so."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Well I don't. You're too old for this, all of you." </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Mysha plays in bed with two young men, gorgeous young hard bodied men. She directs them to kiss. They hesitate then do. She spanks each one and says, "Good boys." </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Juan drives away from the ranch in the middle of the night and then comes to knock on the door of a small cottage. The waitress answers and let's him in. </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Nicolás lays under Beck in bed moaning. Beck rides him, running his fingers through his hair and out of his face. </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>Sofia lays in bed on Lucas's chest. She says, "You're sure you can't prove Beck did it. I mean that's seriously messed up. He poisoned a whole town. Why? To frame Mysha and HunterSouthworth?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Who knows. If it was Marvin I'd say just for the kicks. Bobby and Ray swear that Punk wasn't like that."</p><p></p><p></p><p>"His dad?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Yea. But Beck. He's just an angry cuss. The man's got like a great big whole in the middle of him. He hates everyone and anyone." </p><p></p><p></p><p>"Why?"</p><p></p><p></p><p>"Who knows. Some people just kissed they was born I guess." </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>On his stomach Nicolás moans in agony as Beck pounds him and spanks him and slaps the back of his head. </p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p>The family gathers out back by the pool for breakfast. Sofia's missing. Nicolás looks hung over or worse. Ray and Bobby head out to work the ranch. Juan announces "They're" here for the Monday morning debriefing. Sofia tells him to go, she'll pick up. Their little boy finishes his breakfast.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="stevew, post: 59194, member: 130"] Tombstone (1993) comparisons: Virgil: Lucas - moral center Wyatt: Mysha - protagonist Morgan: Nicolás - fun loving, light hearted, younger brother in trouble Doc: Juan - sidekick (of Virgil, more in regards to Wyatt) Josephine: Sofia - fun loving love interest (in this case the love interest of Virgil) Curly Bill: Marvin Anderson - antagonist (sociopath). Note: Gene Hackman or Powers Boothe in the role Johnny Ringo: Beck - antagonist (psychopath) Juan sits at a table in a hole in the wall bar drinking, smoking and playing cards. Lucas sits down and puts his money on the table. "Anyone get in on this action?" "Not anyone but you sure can. I'll take your money from you any day." "Fellas. He cleaning house again?" The one guys says, "Sure is." "Sugar," he says to the waitress, "Bourbon and Branch." A man approaches the table, "Krebs. What's this I hear you poisoned the water." "I didn't poison no water and besides you got a well out at your place. They're just talking water in town." "Hear tell you poisoned the ground water." "Well that water makes it to me before it gets to you so that'd make me an idiot. You ain't callin' me an idiot are you?" "Listen you son of a bitch." Juan says, "Don't go talking about his Madre like that." "Ok what? I ain't afraid of you." "Yes you are. You're sweatin' Line a stuck pig. Now go away." "Make me." Lucas says, "Let's just calm down. We're just playin' some cards. I've got people looking to get to the bottom of what happened with water." "Screw your people." The man lunges for Lucas and Juan jumps before anything happens shoving him down. Pretty soon the whole bar has broken out in a fight. A limousine pulls up at the police station and a looking worst for the wear Lucas and Juan get in back. A man sits across from them (played by Dennis Haysbert). "We don't have the proof but, but I'm certain Marvin Anderson's son, what'll they call him? Beck. He's behind the water." Lucas says, "His father put him up to it?" "No I'm positive that didn't happen." "Why you so sure?" "Gone through emails and phone calls. Got everything around him bugged. We don't make mistakes." "No I suppose not." Juan says, "But you won't give us the proof we need to handle Beck Anderson?" "That's not gonna happen. We will give you a fall guy." "You're asking a lot out of me in exchange for a fall guy." "He use to work in Senator Anderson's office. It'll open up an investigation and the Senator will be tainted. He's the one we're really worried about anyway." "And why's that?" "He's tied into what we need your help with." "Pushing the price of feed up." "We've got a couple others on the line with you." "I'm sure I can guess who. So we do what you ask and then what? The Russians blink?" The man doesn't answer. "You are talking about effecting the Russian economy. I spoke to my cousin, John Ross, he's expecting another drop in oil prices now that the President's eased up on federal leases. You're after the Russian Economy." "Do we have a deal Mr. Krebs?" "It's Ewing. Lucas Ewing." "Do we have a deal?" "Yes." Lucas and Juan step out of the car as a pick up truck arrives along side of them. Bobby and Ray get out. "Who was that?" Bobby asks. "And old friend," Lucas answers. "Bailed us out," Juan says. In the kitchen at Pradera Sofia bandages himself up while Bobby helps Juan. They recount what happens and even Bobby says he wishes he'd been there, Sofia admonishes, "Bobby." "Does a man a lot of good once and a while to get in a fight. Ain't that right Ray?" "If you say so." "Well I don't. You're too old for this, all of you." Mysha plays in bed with two young men, gorgeous young hard bodied men. She directs them to kiss. They hesitate then do. She spanks each one and says, "Good boys." Juan drives away from the ranch in the middle of the night and then comes to knock on the door of a small cottage. The waitress answers and let's him in. Nicolás lays under Beck in bed moaning. Beck rides him, running his fingers through his hair and out of his face. Sofia lays in bed on Lucas's chest. She says, "You're sure you can't prove Beck did it. I mean that's seriously messed up. He poisoned a whole town. Why? To frame Mysha and HunterSouthworth?" "Who knows. If it was Marvin I'd say just for the kicks. Bobby and Ray swear that Punk wasn't like that." "His dad?" "Yea. But Beck. He's just an angry cuss. The man's got like a great big whole in the middle of him. He hates everyone and anyone." "Why?" "Who knows. Some people just kissed they was born I guess." On his stomach Nicolás moans in agony as Beck pounds him and spanks him and slaps the back of his head. The family gathers out back by the pool for breakfast. Sofia's missing. Nicolás looks hung over or worse. Ray and Bobby head out to work the ranch. Juan announces "They're" here for the Monday morning debriefing. Sofia tells him to go, she'll pick up. Their little boy finishes his breakfast. [/QUOTE]
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