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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 61784">Finally had some time to read this so here&#039;s the promised feedback. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />I like the way you started this story by describing what happened on the screen. It felt very much like a tv script in the sense that you described what was going on in the image visually as well as the dialogue. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />Good idea with the poisoned ground water. It reminds me a bit of Erin Brochovich...I like the idea of Jenna and Ray having two in common kids after Lucas, Mysha &amp; Nicolas. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />It expands their family and blows some life into this spin-off, as it does need new characters to work. I like the set up for this with the new characters that you&#039;ve invented and mixed in with the original ones. It&#039;s made me think that if there actually was a Dallas spin-off focused around the Krebbs (Ray, Jenna, Lucas, additional kids, Donna, Senator Dowling and Margaret) with Bobby also playing a part in it, I might actually like to watch it. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />Um don&#039;t you mean that Ray had divorced Jenna?I guess it must have been a typo as Jenna and Gary have never been together and thank God for that as Jenna being with two brothers is more than enough.Also what&#039;s Tombstone (1993)?I don&#039;t think I&#039;ve ever heard of that movie or TV-show...</blockquote>

[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 61784"] Finally had some time to read this so here's the promised feedback. :) I like the way you started this story by describing what happened on the screen. It felt very much like a tv script in the sense that you described what was going on in the image visually as well as the dialogue. :) Good idea with the poisoned ground water. It reminds me a bit of Erin Brochovich... I like the idea of Jenna and Ray having two in common kids after Lucas, Mysha & Nicolas. :) It expands their family and blows some life into this spin-off, as it does need new characters to work. I like the set up for this with the new characters that you've invented and mixed in with the original ones. It's made me think that if there actually was a Dallas spin-off focused around the Krebbs (Ray, Jenna, Lucas, additional kids, Donna, Senator Dowling and Margaret) with Bobby also playing a part in it, I might actually like to watch it. :) Um don't you mean that Ray had divorced Jenna? I guess it must have been a typo as Jenna and Gary have never been together and thank God for that as Jenna being with two brothers is more than enough. Also what's Tombstone (1993)? I don't think I've ever heard of that movie or TV-show... [/QUOTE]

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