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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 231666"><p>Thank you so much for your feedback. It's appreciated as always. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>[USER=66]@superman fan[/USER] I am glad you liked the wedding. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>[USER=5055]@CeeCee72[/USER] thank you. I need to get into your new story too. I haven't had the time to read it yet. </p><p>The wedding party is far from over so there will be several scenes where people will interact with each other. Unfortunately Lucas and Bobby doesn't have much interaction though. So maybe I missed something there...</p><p></p><p>Anyway before it's on to the wedding party here's a scene from back home.</p><p></p><p>*</p><p></p><p> Meanwhile at Southfork were Pamela Rebecca, John Ross, Josephine, Christopher and Elena gathered around the breakfast table out on the patio. A pram was standing nearby where baby Drew was fast asleep. “This was a nice idea,” Josephine smiled. “I like having pancakes with my brothers.” Hearing Pamela Rebecca hark she hurried to add, “and my cousin.”</p><p></p><p> “Thank you,” Pamela said.</p><p></p><p> John Ross then took a look at his watch saying, “So I guess Emma must be getting married just about now.”</p><p></p><p> “Are you sad that you weren’t invited?” Josephine asked.</p><p></p><p> “Nah,” John Ross shrugged his shoulders. “A trip to Switzerland could have been nice but given my history with Emma it would have been weird for me to be there.”</p><p></p><p> “You see we were invited,” Pamela Rebecca corrected Josephine. “We just chose not to go.”</p><p></p><p> “What about you Chris?” John Ross asked. “How come you’re not at your brother’s wedding?”</p><p></p><p> “Lucas is not my brother,” Christopher insisted. “We didn’t grow up together and he won’t even acknowledge Bobby as his father.”</p><p></p><p> “But he’s still our cousin, right?” Josephine asked.</p><p></p><p> “That he is, but I didn’t feel like going to his wedding,” Christopher said. “I mean Elena’s just had Drew so she’s too tired to travel and I don’t wanna go without her.”</p><p></p><p> “Yeah and besides we didn’t exactly have a good time the last time we went to Switzerland,” Elena sighed.</p><p></p><p> “Yeah when we went to look for my mother,” Christopher sighed. “But all we found was that imposter who filled my head full of lies and Elena and I broke up.”</p><p></p><p> “I can see why you don’t wanna go back there,” Josephine said compassionately.</p><p></p><p> “Yeah one trip to Switzerland was one too many,” Elena said, when the baby started to cry and she got up to tend to him. Elena then picked up her baby and started rocking him until he stopped crying.</p><p></p><p> Josephine frowned, as she turned to John Ross. “But if you chose not to go to Lucas wedding because you’ve had an affair with the bride, then how come you went to Elena’s and Chris given your history?”</p><p></p><p> “You mean that I used to be married to Chris and Elena was engaged to John Ross?” Pamela said.</p><p></p><p> “Exactly,” Josephine said. “I mean that if anything ought to have been awkward.”</p><p></p><p> “Well given Chris and my history I just had to come to his wedding,” John Ross smiled at his cousin. “See Chris here has always been more like a brother than a cousin to me and besides since he was best man at my wedding it would have been rude not to return the favor.”</p><p></p><p> “I see,” Josephine nodded, as it hadn’t occurred to her before that her two brothers were that close to each other. “So I guess this means that we’re just one big happy family.”</p><p></p><p> “Yup,” John Ross nodded, “and speaking of which, I wonder how much tension there’s at Lucas wedding considering that most of the guest list are made up of people who used to be married or engaged to each other.”</p><p></p><p> “You know from the way you described it, I really don’t see why you chose to miss the wedding, I mean given your history with the bride I am sure you would have fit in just fine,” Josephine smiled at her brother, who made a face when he heard that. He was well aware of how complicated his family was so he was sure that the wedding was an awkward affair and yet a part of him couldn’t help but wishing that he could have been there.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 231666"] Thank you so much for your feedback. It's appreciated as always. :) [USER=66]@superman fan[/USER] I am glad you liked the wedding. :) [USER=5055]@CeeCee72[/USER] thank you. I need to get into your new story too. I haven't had the time to read it yet. The wedding party is far from over so there will be several scenes where people will interact with each other. Unfortunately Lucas and Bobby doesn't have much interaction though. So maybe I missed something there... Anyway before it's on to the wedding party here's a scene from back home. * Meanwhile at Southfork were Pamela Rebecca, John Ross, Josephine, Christopher and Elena gathered around the breakfast table out on the patio. A pram was standing nearby where baby Drew was fast asleep. “This was a nice idea,” Josephine smiled. “I like having pancakes with my brothers.” Hearing Pamela Rebecca hark she hurried to add, “and my cousin.” “Thank you,” Pamela said. John Ross then took a look at his watch saying, “So I guess Emma must be getting married just about now.” “Are you sad that you weren’t invited?” Josephine asked. “Nah,” John Ross shrugged his shoulders. “A trip to Switzerland could have been nice but given my history with Emma it would have been weird for me to be there.” “You see we were invited,” Pamela Rebecca corrected Josephine. “We just chose not to go.” “What about you Chris?” John Ross asked. “How come you’re not at your brother’s wedding?” “Lucas is not my brother,” Christopher insisted. “We didn’t grow up together and he won’t even acknowledge Bobby as his father.” “But he’s still our cousin, right?” Josephine asked. “That he is, but I didn’t feel like going to his wedding,” Christopher said. “I mean Elena’s just had Drew so she’s too tired to travel and I don’t wanna go without her.” “Yeah and besides we didn’t exactly have a good time the last time we went to Switzerland,” Elena sighed. “Yeah when we went to look for my mother,” Christopher sighed. “But all we found was that imposter who filled my head full of lies and Elena and I broke up.” “I can see why you don’t wanna go back there,” Josephine said compassionately. “Yeah one trip to Switzerland was one too many,” Elena said, when the baby started to cry and she got up to tend to him. Elena then picked up her baby and started rocking him until he stopped crying. Josephine frowned, as she turned to John Ross. “But if you chose not to go to Lucas wedding because you’ve had an affair with the bride, then how come you went to Elena’s and Chris given your history?” “You mean that I used to be married to Chris and Elena was engaged to John Ross?” Pamela said. “Exactly,” Josephine said. “I mean that if anything ought to have been awkward.” “Well given Chris and my history I just had to come to his wedding,” John Ross smiled at his cousin. “See Chris here has always been more like a brother than a cousin to me and besides since he was best man at my wedding it would have been rude not to return the favor.” “I see,” Josephine nodded, as it hadn’t occurred to her before that her two brothers were that close to each other. “So I guess this means that we’re just one big happy family.” “Yup,” John Ross nodded, “and speaking of which, I wonder how much tension there’s at Lucas wedding considering that most of the guest list are made up of people who used to be married or engaged to each other.” “You know from the way you described it, I really don’t see why you chose to miss the wedding, I mean given your history with the bride I am sure you would have fit in just fine,” Josephine smiled at her brother, who made a face when he heard that. He was well aware of how complicated his family was so he was sure that the wedding was an awkward affair and yet a part of him couldn’t help but wishing that he could have been there. [/QUOTE]
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