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<blockquote data-quote="Karin Schill" data-source="post: 266146"><p>I'm still an update behind. I tend to be most of the time as I read the updates at night before falling asleep and you usually post in the mornings before I have had time to comment on the previous chapter. So sorry for my lack of feedback. </p><p></p><p>Anyway here's some thoughts. First of all Kristin is super annoying and Dusty too. </p><p></p><p>Jock is acting like a jackass too. But I am guessing it's because he is sick. </p><p>I think it's nice that this story includes Jock as we rarely see him in fanfics but I also preferred Miss Ellie's second husband Clayton to Jock. Probably because I watched the end of the show when Miss Ellie was together with Clayton first.</p><p></p><p>Is the baby Sue Ellen expecting JR's?</p><p>I am assuming it is but I am not quite sure how much time that has passed since they got back together. <img src="http://yoursmiles.org/msmile/think/m1714.gif" class="smilie" loading="lazy" alt=":confuse:" title="Confuse :confuse:" data-shortname=":confuse:" /></p><p></p><p>Finally it doesn't make any sense for Pam and Bobby to look into adoption at this point since the first two miscarriages was due to accidents, falling off the hayloft and falling off a horse. Pam thought she couldn't have kids because Digger had neurofibromatosis but then she found out right before JR was shot that Digger wasn't her real father. So she didn't have the disease. On the show Pam didn't find out that she would probably never be able to carry a baby to full term until after Rebecca had come back. It was after that they started talking about adoption. But that happened after JR was shot. So your timeline breaks off before that happened, meaning that Bobby and Pam could probably have a baby if they tried. </p><p></p><p>Just thought I'd mention that.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Karin Schill, post: 266146"] I'm still an update behind. I tend to be most of the time as I read the updates at night before falling asleep and you usually post in the mornings before I have had time to comment on the previous chapter. So sorry for my lack of feedback. Anyway here's some thoughts. First of all Kristin is super annoying and Dusty too. Jock is acting like a jackass too. But I am guessing it's because he is sick. I think it's nice that this story includes Jock as we rarely see him in fanfics but I also preferred Miss Ellie's second husband Clayton to Jock. Probably because I watched the end of the show when Miss Ellie was together with Clayton first. Is the baby Sue Ellen expecting JR's? I am assuming it is but I am not quite sure how much time that has passed since they got back together. :confuse: Finally it doesn't make any sense for Pam and Bobby to look into adoption at this point since the first two miscarriages was due to accidents, falling off the hayloft and falling off a horse. Pam thought she couldn't have kids because Digger had neurofibromatosis but then she found out right before JR was shot that Digger wasn't her real father. So she didn't have the disease. On the show Pam didn't find out that she would probably never be able to carry a baby to full term until after Rebecca had come back. It was after that they started talking about adoption. But that happened after JR was shot. So your timeline breaks off before that happened, meaning that Bobby and Pam could probably have a baby if they tried. Just thought I'd mention that. [/QUOTE]
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